Talk:Scientology/Archive 1

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This page was previously a redirect to L. Ron Hubbard. Now it's a fully sourced quote page. Cirt (talk) 07:46, 10 June 2009 (UTC)
 * The introduction seems much more extensive than necessary to identify the topic. One quarter of this, including a Wikipedia link, would be enough. ~ Ningauble 12:09, 10 June 2009 (UTC)
 * As anything would likely be controversial, I took the lede from that at Scientology. Perhaps we could draft up a shorter version here on the talk page. Cirt (talk) 15:39, 10 June 2009 (UTC)
 * I shortened the lede quite a bit . Better? Cirt (talk) 17:46, 10 June 2009 (UTC)
 * Better, but I trimmed it further. Perhaps we could also do without the last sentence, but I am resisting the urge to make the whole intro nothing but "Quotes about ['pedia link]." ~ Ningauble 15:43, 11 June 2009 (UTC)
 * Your last edit was good, let's leave it the way it is now. Cirt (talk) 19:13, 11 June 2009 (UTC)